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Swords and Hoverboards :update: by Super-Cute Swords and Hoverboards :update: by Super-Cute
Another Portfolio attempt....
As usual I would love advice :>

EDIT:
Added another person as well as many other things
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Angelwarrior01 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist
RAELLY COOL
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SizzleLizzle Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Woah!! Even more epic!
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GhostlyPepper Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohhhh dang it looks even nicer than before! (Not that it didn't already look nice, but you know what I mean) <:

Something that could maybe be touched up is the girls hair? It's looks a bit scribbly with the way it's shaded, what I recommend is maybe making the base color and making very subtle strokes in the way the hair is growing?

This is a major improvement though! You definitely took all the advice you recieved and used it well, the contrast, perspective, tone, gosh it's all just so well fit and it's quite admirable! Great job as always! c:
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Tearahk Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It looks sooo epic! :D
And thanks for using my idea! ^_^
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SizzleLizzle Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
She looks so epic!! How on Earth did you imagine all that?
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ha, I have lots of stories :> I often feel very un-creative so this means a lot <333
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SizzleLizzle Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D
This is very creative! :la:
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totaldile Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooooh this is fantastic!
I really like the colour scheme, it gives off the vibe of post-apocalyptic futureness, which is what I think you were going for. Personally I dislike the other random hoverboarder in the background, I feel he steals attention away from the main person in this pose. Maybe you could make him a little less conspicuous by dulling his colours a little more? Just an idea ;w;'. The only other thing that bothers me is the white dots on the very front venus flytrap things. They seem very blurred and un-painted compared to the rest of the digital painting. Other than that, I love the concept, the position of the forward-most character (she seems like 'screw you all, i'm just gonna bash my way through here with epic skills), and the background (which portrays the feeling of emptiness, which you have done extremely well if that was what you were going for, as it is simple and adds to drawing attention the to the main character.

Overall, amazing job :heart:
I remember why I started watching you, hun!
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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I've been adding to it and I have this so far.

Making the guy more dull is good Ill try that.
Yeah Ill repaint the eyes too I noticed that as well...

thank you so much for the kind words and advice!
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totaldile Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ooooohooohoo.
That's even better!
Bahaha thanks for listening to my advice ^-^'
(Was that cut on her shoulder there on the original image? If not, that was a great addition, and if it was, you've done awesome making it look more prominent. This is a very promising piece!)
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