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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Something that could maybe be touched up is the girls hair? It's looks a bit scribbly with the way it's shaded, what I recommend is maybe making the base color and making very subtle strokes in the way the hair is growing?
This is a major improvement though! You definitely took all the advice you recieved and used it well, the contrast, perspective, tone, gosh it's all just so well fit and it's quite admirable! Great job as always! c:
And thanks for using my idea! ^_^
This is very creative!
I really like the colour scheme, it gives off the vibe of post-apocalyptic futureness, which is what I think you were going for. Personally I dislike the other random hoverboarder in the background, I feel he steals attention away from the main person in this pose. Maybe you could make him a little less conspicuous by dulling his colours a little more? Just an idea ;w;'. The only other thing that bothers me is the white dots on the very front venus flytrap things. They seem very blurred and un-painted compared to the rest of the digital painting. Other than that, I love the concept, the position of the forward-most character (she seems like 'screw you all, i'm just gonna bash my way through here with epic skills), and the background (which portrays the feeling of emptiness, which you have done extremely well if that was what you were going for, as it is simple and adds to drawing attention the to the main character.
Overall, amazing job
I remember why I started watching you, hun!
I've been adding to it and I have this so far.
Making the guy more dull is good Ill try that.
Yeah Ill repaint the eyes too I noticed that as well...
thank you so much for the kind words and advice!
That's even better!
Bahaha thanks for listening to my advice ^-^'
(Was that cut on her shoulder there on the original image? If not, that was a great addition, and if it was, you've done awesome making it look more prominent. This is a very promising piece!)