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Swords and Hoverboards :update: by Super-Cute Swords and Hoverboards :update: by Super-Cute
Another Portfolio attempt....
As usual I would love advice :>

EDIT:
Added another person as well as many other things
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Angelwarrior01 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist
RAELLY COOL
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SizzleLizzle Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Woah!! Even more epic!
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GhostlyPepper Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohhhh dang it looks even nicer than before! (Not that it didn't already look nice, but you know what I mean) <:

Something that could maybe be touched up is the girls hair? It's looks a bit scribbly with the way it's shaded, what I recommend is maybe making the base color and making very subtle strokes in the way the hair is growing?

This is a major improvement though! You definitely took all the advice you recieved and used it well, the contrast, perspective, tone, gosh it's all just so well fit and it's quite admirable! Great job as always! c:
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Tearahk Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It looks sooo epic! :D
And thanks for using my idea! ^_^
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SizzleLizzle Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
She looks so epic!! How on Earth did you imagine all that?
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ha, I have lots of stories :> I often feel very un-creative so this means a lot <333
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SizzleLizzle Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D
This is very creative! :la:
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totaldile Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooooh this is fantastic!
I really like the colour scheme, it gives off the vibe of post-apocalyptic futureness, which is what I think you were going for. Personally I dislike the other random hoverboarder in the background, I feel he steals attention away from the main person in this pose. Maybe you could make him a little less conspicuous by dulling his colours a little more? Just an idea ;w;'. The only other thing that bothers me is the white dots on the very front venus flytrap things. They seem very blurred and un-painted compared to the rest of the digital painting. Other than that, I love the concept, the position of the forward-most character (she seems like 'screw you all, i'm just gonna bash my way through here with epic skills), and the background (which portrays the feeling of emptiness, which you have done extremely well if that was what you were going for, as it is simple and adds to drawing attention the to the main character.

Overall, amazing job :heart:
I remember why I started watching you, hun!
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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I've been adding to it and I have this so far.

Making the guy more dull is good Ill try that.
Yeah Ill repaint the eyes too I noticed that as well...

thank you so much for the kind words and advice!
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totaldile Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ooooohooohoo.
That's even better!
Bahaha thanks for listening to my advice ^-^'
(Was that cut on her shoulder there on the original image? If not, that was a great addition, and if it was, you've done awesome making it look more prominent. This is a very promising piece!)
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Tearahk Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Could us maybe one more person on a hover board. Maybe with a rocket or a heavy turret! :D
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
;> I am adding a new person! Thanks for the advice!
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Tearahk Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome. glad I could help :D
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Beraxillia Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
needs shotgunchucks... or perhaps that's just me.
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GhostlyPepper Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Another lovely piece! I love the colors chosen in this, and although I'm not quite sure what is going on I like it a lot!

The only piece of advice I really have for this one is the guys hand in the background blends in with the building a bit, it is a bit hard to tell he is holding the gun, but that may be my dinky quality monitor fffff

But seriously, not only is this great, but it's so eye-catching, it makes me look all around to catch different things and that's definitely a good thing! The pose, the emotion, and the perspective and angle especially help with that!

Sorry for the lack of a long comment today if those are what you prefer, but there's really nothing else I can spot here that needs fixing! (Plus I need to be going to bed soon ahhh)

I also feel weird sometimes about giving you a critique because I look up to you so it's like what do I really know /)n(\ So I hope they aren't like dumb or anything eheheh
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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I've been using the advice to work on it here's what I have so far!
I love your critiques!! You have great ideas! You dont need to be a master chef to know if a meal is good or bad, nor do you need to be a great artist to give advice~ <3
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GhostlyPepper Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohhh wow this is really great! The one who was added makes it look a little less blank, and (although this was in the original, I just forgot to point it out) I love how the way the 'blood' is dripping off of her sword in the direction of the thing that is falling, definitely gives you context there. Also that top left corner is nice too, definitely shows just how many 'things' there are around, really well done :)

Ahhh thank you so much oh my goodness /)u(\ I just wanted to provide critiques because not only are portfolios like important but I noticed you didn't get many on the first one you asked for, so I wanted to help out? Haha, I'm rambling, sorry.

Short Version: That looks really nice and thanks for the compliment! c:
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canadianpeanutbuter Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
I think the arm that is not raised may be a little short? It might just be the perspective, though. The coloring is really great and the pose is dynamic, but I think it would have worked better if her eyes were open? Amazing piece, though!
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Vahlre Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I think everything in this is great. The depth of the perspective is awesome, and the colors are wonderful for the feel. I do think you should kind of clean up the girl seeing as she's is where the point of the picture is being drawn in. She just blends a bit too much with the rest, so maybe just render her a little more maybe change up her pose a bit cause it seems like she's being chases so I'm not sure if that pose is fitting for it? But that's depending on what you're going for. The guy in the okay. He doesn't do too much for the rest of the picture though. Perhaps if you add in another person to balance it a bit.
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Alright I'm adding another person now.
As for the pose she's doing more of a "CHARGE!!" than being chased. So I tried to show that more with the new person??
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Ill add a bit more detail on him lol
I've edited the colours a bit to make her stand out more how's that looking?

also thank you for the advice!!
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Vahlre Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*happy
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Vahlre Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh okay! I can really see that now! : D Adding in the guy was good, and yes the colors make it better. Like a spot light is beaming on her a bit. :)

No problem! Always happen to help!
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Thorntails Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
love it, as the last one
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BawnjohrMissyour Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
the color palette is gorgeous, as is the shading. if anything, the character could stand out a bit more with less muted/murky colors or a more striking pose, just to catch the viewer's attention and draw it to a specific part of the picture. you have wonderful detail going on right now, but the lack of difference between her and her surroundings makes the impact less great. make something pop, and it'll wow people even more! great job!
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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I'm working on it how are the colours looking?
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BawnjohrMissyour Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
stunning! it definitely gives it a stronger first impact. c:
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes! I know exactly what you're saying! I shall try, thank you for the advice! :>>
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Oddsword Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
More swords, more boards, yo. Sheeit, that dude's got a gun, throw in some more of them too!
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
best comment omg
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MyahDuckie Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think its done very well!
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much!!
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