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Pepper by Super-Cute Pepper by Super-Cute
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Working on my portfolio again and would love advice!!

The top left corner looks really empty to me, but my sister says it's empty in a good way and adds to the picture. Thoughts?

Would it look better without the frame?

Any other ideas?

Please help me out I want this to be the best it can be :>
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Khan-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
It's great. Where is this from?
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
My mind? :> It's my Original Character!
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Tearahk Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think it only needs some dirt, or maybe some blood splatter up in the corner. But beyond that, it looks pretty good. :D
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Blue-Pencil-Crayon Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
If you want some really good critique, I suggest posting your art on conceptart.org
From what I've seen there, they offer amazing critiques and could really help you with this piece :)

I really like the colours and lighting on the person, looks nice :)
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Thorntails Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
I think its perfect, i love it :3
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ApertureIndigo Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student
Very nice~
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GhostlyPepper Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is very nice! The tone is definitely well portrayed, and I absolutely love the shading, and the anatomy as well as the pose are both well done. I also enjoy the colors as well. <:

Maybe at the top left there could be an added sketch of some sort like the map they are writing on? And in my opinion, there is a bit too much of the forest shown on the right, but again, I may be wrong on that. It may look better showing as much as it is now.

However, to touch on the frame, in my opinion, it looks better with the frame than without. I say keep it :)
And I still can't get over how nice this looks though. I've seen your art for quite a while now and I am stunned at how you've progressed, it's really inspiring! Keep up the good work!
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Super-Cute Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yay you're back for more help! I was hoping you would be ;>

Okay so judging from your comments and others, keep the frame, and maybe add like some dirt or something simple on the wall.

Thank you for your kind words 8'D it means a lot!
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GhostlyPepper Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem at all! :>
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Gabriellord Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For me, it would look better without the frame. And maybe the emptyness on the top left can be "covered" with some dirt or scratches, not too much.
But all in all, this is a lovly drawing! Specially love the color scheme :)
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