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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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This is so beautiful fffffffff
I suck at critiques sometimes. Erm.... I guess the water could use some work, but I'm the wrong person to ask about making water look realistic. -_-
As for the top being too busy--and correct me if I'm wrong--but it looks like this lake/body of water is, like, under a giant rock cliff? Almost as though if we were flying overhead in an airplane, we would look down into this huge crater and see a lake? If that's the case, I would make it so the stars only appeared where the hole in the top rock is, instead of letting them appear inside. If none of this is making sense, message me and I will mark up what I'm talking about and send the photo back to you. -_- I probably made 0 sense lol. PS, I did need a link, because when I went to go find your post again, I couldn't find it. Stupid dA message system.
Yes, the sides of the water were bugging me, I tried looking up pictures of real water rippling but I couldn't get it quite right...I'll try to fix that a bit when Im putting my portfolio together.
It's actually an underwater cave. The "stars" are actually just glowing drops of water, or light or whatever, not actual stars. hee.
silly dA messages :I
The only piece of advice I can offer here is maybe the background could use a little but more detail? Unless it is meant to be ominously drawn/painted like that. If that is what the intentions were there, then I say it looks perfect!
Also, the way you redrew/painted the mountains is beautiful! Definitely adds to the composition, keeps ones eyes looking all around. Keep up the good work!
<333 I admire your ability to actually help me with critiques rather than commenting "Nice.